Ideas from reading

When writing "Closed System" I thought of a persona that I wanted to be. This persona happened to be me, but I wanted to sound more like a story teller. My voice and style in this poem is very different from the poem "[Untitled]". The poem was originally was supposed to be about my eagerness when learning about new people; mainly girls I was interested in. I decided to step back from that and realize why I am so eager to learn about the "real" person.